短文改错的重要突破口——查行文的一致性(2)
2017-12-16 06:02
导读：5.I live in Beijing, where is the capital of China.(NMET'97)关系副词where在引导定语从句 时不可作主语，应将其改为关系代词which。 6.The sport teaches us the importance of obe
5.I live in Beijing, where is the capital of China.(NMET'97)关系副词where在引导定语从句 时不可作主语，应将其改为关系代词which。
6.The sport teaches us the importance of obedience. Eachplayer must obey the captain, who is the leader of the team.And they must not break the rules too often if we want to winthe gam e.(NMET'98)纵观全篇短文，都是用的第一人称。这里突然冒出一个第三人称they，显然不一致，应改为we。
四、查平行结构是否平行一致
由and，or，but，either…or…，neither…nor…，not only …but also…， as well as等并列连词和词 组连接的结构可称为平行结构。平行结构在词性、时态、非谓语动词的形式上往往要求前后一致。答题时要留心平行结构前后是否对等平行，这也是常设的错误。例如：
1.Modern people know…，have better food，and to live incleaner surroundings.(NMET'93)应将 to live前的to删掉，因为and连接的是know，hav
